My Possessive Bodyguard

My Possessive Bodyguard by Jamilexis Gallardo

This review originally featured on the Amazon page for this book, but because I posted it using my real name, I'll be posting here too.

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My Review:

The title of the book is called My Possessive Bodyguard. The title in itself is misleading. I read this book in one afternoon, and I only ever counted TWO TIMES where Nathan was possessive but that’s about it. The author gave the book its name but failed to deliver in the department of possessive.

Other than that, I also found a number of mistakes with the book. These mistakes are: indentation too big for first sentences, font size too small which made it difficult to read, spelling errors where the editor was carless, unprofessional and couldn’t give two shitake mushrooms about editing out the errors, and there were letters and commas where they shouldn’t be. I also thought most of the events in the book were left unexplained, therefore creating plot hole issues, and felt the book needed to be longer or at least have the events in the book explained.

The only upside that this book has going for it is the price of the eBook. This book has potential but shame the author didn’t deliver.

If your looking for an okay afternoon read then this is it but don’t expect much from the book because it wasn’t as great as the author made it out to be. I was really disappointed with this book and was left hanging for more of it, and I’m still baffled about how the author can fit a whole heap of random words onto 234 pages, give it a name and call it a book when she never gave much thought to the book or plot line at all. I actually feel sorry for the characters.


Afterthoughts:

This was an okay book, it's great for an afternoon read but I wouldn't bother spending your money on either the paperback or the ebook, and I won't be reading this book again. 

However, if you are interested in purchasing this book, in either paperback or eBook, you can purchase it here.

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